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Honeymoon

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We have waited for so long,
For this sweet and lovely day.
Let's listen to a romantic song.
Bed of Roses, here we lay.

With every step, I'll be careful.
My touch will be gentle and mild my dear.
I promise to make this eve wonderful.
You can trust me, never fear.

Listen to my heart as it beat,
Slowly then going fast.
In this dark room where we meet,
Making love like it's our last.

Our body moves with unison.
Dancing like we're so high.
Instantly losing all our reason.
Beautiful ending, with a sigh.

As we rest this night,
We hear the rustling of the tide.
Oh the moon is a beautiful sight,
Because you are by my side.
My first tetra-metric poem with rhymes..LOL..I usually do free verse.. So there it is..kinda sensual, but romantic..Enjoy!

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Were there lines that doesn't follow the metric system I used? Was my rhyming okay? And was I able to make it like romantic?
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lucysanatomy's avatar
Beautiful poem, I like the way it rhymes, nice job! :)